vleugels van gevoel Ik vlieg met felgekleurde vleugels, gemaakt uit het puurste gevoel. De wind waait, een storm van emotie. Neergeschoten en gevangen door de jager met zijn hond. kooi, geblaf pijn, gevangen help, oh wind waai als voorheen Een engel spreidt haar witte vleugels, ik ben gered, hoe kan ik haar bedanken? Weg van het huis, ver weg van de jager, weg uit die benauwende kooi. Ze raakt me aan, mijn pijn verdwijnt. Dankbaar vlieg ik weg, met de vleugels van gevoel. |
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-Dezelfde jager, dezelfde engel, maar dan een tijd later.-
Als angst en het gevoel van gevangenschap de liefde en het gevoel van goede zorg overwint. Vraag: Ikzelf twijfel sterk aan de tweede en laatste strofe, terecht? alt. "ze raakt me aan..." --> "Ik haal rustig adem..." |
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Ik vind de eerste strofe erg mooi
de tweede en de laatste heb ik ook absoluut geen probleem mee, de tweede is gaaf met zijn stream of conciousness
de 3e strofe echter vind ik wat minder
maar dat kan aan mij liggen
ik heb niets met engelen
het is trouwens sprijdt, met dt
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you can only be young once, but you can always be immature
danku.
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Wie niet durft te denken blijft bang.
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